It really gave me the chills! Keep it up <3

I barely get on here to play games, but this game really got me hooked! I loved the character design and how it reflected each other's personality and demeanor. I also loved the way there was interactive puzzles to keep us hooked,  the storyline also was wonderful as i got hyped reading the text boxes, Its a fun game i played and i wish more to come! 

One of my absolute favorite games from this year’s Spooktober Jam! The artwork is super polished and amazingly done, especially the character designs for the Baron, Collector, and Guide (looking through the comments, glad I’m not the only Guide simp 👀). The story was super engaging, even if the puzzles were a bit more on the simpler side, and Christopher’s characterization was super interesting. The sound effects for each of the arbiters was also really killer. Awesome job <3

Unlike most comments I'm reading on here, I hardly disagree with the Ajay conversation being long. Wasn't that like... five minutes? I really appreciate when creators take their time with dialogue. Isn't that one of the most importants points when creating a story? How are you going to appreciate characters, otherwise? I'm taking into consideration how trivial the conversation was, by the way. And it was still important, but whatever. What got me into this game tonight was the background with the chairs. The perspective, the colors and the scenario are so cool. Like, SO cool. Also, loved the black and white drawings. Was really intrigued by The Collector and The Baron, specially. Ending was great. Loved the last bit. Didn't expect that and I think it's a great idea.

I’m extremely impressed! There’s a really nice atmosphere to it and the writing is really strong. You tell a lot about the characters with a few lines of dialogue and the set up is solid. I think the ending was a bit lacking, it felt a little rushed but that’s my only real issue. The art is beautiful and I wish there was more of it in the game! I’d buy an art book/zine of your art. The riddles and little challenges were fun and creative. I like it when visual novels test me to make sure I’m paying attention, it makes me more invested in every little detail. I did a play through of it but itch doesn’t let me embed yt vids for some reason so here’s the link https://youtu.be/8LlsX-G2_UQ I left some links to some games you might be interested in checking out in the description. I hope my feedback is helpful!!

Ohh your art, bgs and sprites were beautiful, I remember them from Spaghetti, but the almost painted, shadowy aesthetic of the denizens of the betwixt was amazing in its own right!

I particularly enjoyed Christopher's personal journey and how it was involved in the story you put together... What an unsettling but intriguing little world you've built here! I really enjoyed this!

Deliciously spooky atmosphere? Check! Gorgeous Creepy monster design? Check! Great sound design? Check! Riddles and puzzles? Double check! The Guide? I admit...I checked him out. ✨ Goodness, this was so so much fun! Thank you for a very enjoyable game--excellent work!

The trials are so fun and add so much to the player experience; The ending is open ended so I hope we eventually get too see what is the actual price to pay for the contract and if they ever gonna go back for the actual target.

Gotta hand it to The Collector, actual scary and ominous monster.

Keep up the good work!

Like another mentioned, it was a bit slow at the beginning talking to Ajay, but when I was thrust into the other world I was HOOKED! Especially with the interactive segments. At the beginning of the hallway area I thought how neat it'd be if we could choose to move around, and sure enough an arrow appeared to choose to move forward! More could definitely be done with that (move left/right/etc) but for a game done in a month, damn. Kudos to you.

I'll be Kenney's friend ;_;

!!Spoilers!!

The Baron 'misheard' 15 mins of fame as 15 seconds huh lmao

This was a super cool glimpse into a spooky universe and now I'm sitting here like 'what do you MEAN that's it!!!!' That last conversation with The Baron was packed with so much intrigue that we barely get a glimpse at and I want to know MORE. But at the same time I don't, because the horrors that you never understand are a treat all their own. That said, if you ever revisit this (or make a loose connection down the line - am I wrong in thinking the reuse of the name Ajay here isn't coincidence?) I'd pounce on it so fast.

Also the art for the other realm is absolutely gorgeous, I'm in love with the style, particularly on Our Friend Kenney, the bonfire talks and the end meeting with The Baron! He really has a gorgeous grin doesn't he :' )

Spoilers!

WOOWOWW OMG LIKE!!!!

Where to start???? First of all.. hot men. Ajay cans step on me an id thak him. And dont @ me but thr guide FIMNE AS HELL> LIKE damn... emo bitch. i wont you. The Baron too.... zaddy.

I am starting  a fanpae for the collectpr. HE is so me and so cute. id give him all my eyes (2 eyes) NO HESITATION.

The story was so EFFING good, like what.. how did we go from cold spaghetti to this... LOL amazing really (really) LOVED IT.

The mucis! oh man.... THR SONF THAT PLAYED WITH THE BARON???? GOT ME TWERKING N SHI.... Props to music man u r cool asf.

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