Talk:Milton S. Hershey
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Needs more information
this artical needs more info ok — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.8.45.79 (talk) 23:41, 17 February 2005 (UTC)
- the info is pretty good — Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.134.63.52 (talk) 01:09, 31 March 2006 (UTC)
- i agree with both..a little more information would be nice, such as who owns the business now, it needs more recent information — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.62.218.203 (talk) 20:48, 3 April 2006 (UTC)
- it does need mo info — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.100.171.179 (talk) 22:50, 6 April 2006 (UTC)
- It needs to tell a quote from him — Preceding unsigned comment added by 204.38.102.3 (talk) 17:02, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
- The info on here is pretty weak. There's only a date of death with no cause (even if it was natural) and no real exploration on his life. A lot of insperation could be taken from documentries on television or buying a DVD from A&E, the History Channel or another network. And could someone at least put a picture up of him or even his grave sight?
- By the way the above comment was left my myself, I recently remebered my password.My eyes see all 03:35, 16 June 2007 (UTC)
no goood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! terrible — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.103.21.79 (talk) 23:56, 7 April 2013 (UTC)
Medical Center
I don't have the time to find "verifiable" info on this, but Milton Hershey did not build the Penn State Milton S. Hershey Medical Center. The Hershey Trust Co. used the M.S. Hershey Foundation as a conduit to donate the money. It was built well after Milton Hershey's death. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.254.198.242 (talk) 01:07, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
- The Hershey Company's major owner is the Hershey Trust Co., who controls the assets of the Milton Hershey School, the school Milton Hershey founded. The remainder of the stock is publicly held. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.254.198.242 (talk) 01:10, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
- Yeah, what's going on now would be really, really nice, especially for those of us who have to do SCHOOL REPORTS on him and the company. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.206.107.229 (talk) 17:11, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
Category Jewish Americans
I would delete this since it was not sourced. Any thoughts? Thanks--Tom 02:15, 23 December 2006 (UTC)
- He isn't Jewish at all. Mennonite Germanic and the like. The category was just added by that anon who is trying to muscle up the "Jewish American businesspeople" list for his own special reasons, no doubt. I removed the Swiss and German categories also. Although they are likely true, they were unsourced. And besides, the Hersheys have been in the US for a couple of generations before Milton's birth. Mad Jack 06:47, 24 December 2006 (UTC)
- His ancestry was Swiss. This is commemorated by a huge mural map of Switzerland in the Hershey Lodge...or WAS...I haven't been in there in ages. But I'd have to look for footnotable sources on this...don't think you can cite a wall decoration. PurpleChez (talk) 18:40, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
Weak about Hershey's wife
The article is weak about Milton S. Hershey's wife.What desease killed her?I found some years ago, on an internet site, that she went to charlatans, but such as the doctors, they were useless. Agre22 (talk) 00:11, 8 June 2008 (UTC)agre22
- This article is about Milton Hershey, not about his wife. Thus, it is weak on her life, that of his parents, and any other acquaintences he may have had. It is weak because it is not about them, and only says enough to help fill out the description of the main topic, Milton Hershey himself. Loren.wilton (talk) 05:43, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
Catherine E. S. Hershey died of muscular dystrophy
The Hershey's wife, Mrs. Catherine Elizabeth Sweeney Hershey(1872-1915), died of muscular dystrophy in 1915.I think that Mrs. Hershey deserved, an article about her on wikipedia.On an internet site http://www.nndb.com/people/969/000160489/ , I found some informations about Mrs. Hershey. Agre22 (talk) 23:26, 9 June 2008 (UTC)agre22
Agre22 - That's the first record I've seen discuss her illness. I believe most accounts say that she had lung problems, either cystic fibrosis, tuberculosis or chronic asthma/bronchitis. (They traveled quite a bit to find suitable climates, which would not fit with an MS-like illness.) --Typetive (talk) 17:54, 27 August 2008 (UTC)
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Vandalism
I reverted the article back to the April 4, 2008 version, as it appeared that much of the article (about 6k) had gone missing due to vandalism. If any of the information had been removed intentionally, please comment here - and in your edit summary removing it - for future reference. I've also semi-protected the article for 2 weeks - if the vandalism resumes, please leave a message on my talk page and I'll re-protect it. Thank you. --Philosopher Let us reason together. 17:57, 12 December 2008 (UTC)
Founder's Hall
The acoustics in the Founder's Hall auditorium at the Milton Hershey school may well be the best in the world. A stage whisper can be heard in any of the 3000 seats. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.86.233.156 (talk) 04:33, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's been my understanding that Hershey's transfer of his stock to the school was made entirely in secret and that, when he died, he was technically penniless. Don't know how much of this is verifiable, but I always thought those were great details. PurpleChez (talk) 18:43, 25 November 2009 (UTC)
Kitty Hershey
Milton married Catherine Hersey, also known as Kitty. They married May 25th, 1898 in New York city. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.250.46.230 (talk) 17:39, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
milton hershey real facts for your biograghy from a 4th grader
milton hershey was born september 13 1857 and died when he was 88 on october 19th 1945 he was the founder of the hershey company he was born in a farm house in pennslyvannia 9 i don't know how to spell that) and went throw school until he was in 4th grade when his dad henry hershey found him a jod as a news paper publisher. he soon had a sweet tooth for candy buiness and started his friost candy buiness. i'll be back don't be mean your a poopy face don't say bad words you have big boobs yes i'm a boy yah i love justin bieber bye —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.116.30.206 (talk) 03:10, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
who was Mattie?
If I read and re-read very carefully, I can infer that Mattie was his aunt -- is that right? If that's correct then then the relationship should be made clear with the first mention of her name. Sorry for the nit-pick - it's a small but worthwhile point Cabbageears (talk) 16:18, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
Nonsensical sentence, poor punctuation/grammar, lack of antecedents
"Milton Hershey was born on September 13, 1857, to Veronica "Fanny" Snavely and Henry Hershey, in the tricks of caramels, Milton went back home to prove himself to his uncles, who had by then stopped aiding Milton financially and as Milton suspected had stopped believing in him too. He stopped by Chicago and sold some of his candy there too, but soon grew tired of the big city life and headed back to Lancaster, Pennsylvania leaving his father behind.
"Milton returning was a great joy for Mattie who loved Milton as if he were her own son. Milton's return was short-lived though. He soon left for New York."
That first sentence makes NO SENSE WHATSOEVER. "In the tricks of caramels"??!!!
The writer here seems to have an aversion to commas. "Milton went back home to prove himself to his uncles, who had by then stopped aiding Milton financially and, as Milton suspected, had stopped believing in him, too." "... headed back to Lancaster, Pennsylvania, leaving..." "a great joy for Mattie, who loved Milton..." "Milton's return was short-lived, though. He soon left for New York." Better yet: "His return, however, was short lived; he soon left for New York."
Grammar: "Milton's return," not "Milton returning"
Who is Mattie?? There is no previous reference.
I couldn't bring myself to read beyond these two paragraphs of the article. I've not seen something this poor on any other Wikipedia entry.
Lms419 (talk) 02:12, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
Incomplete
The article is incomplete. Under the Hershey Chocolate company section, at the last paragraph:
The factory was in the center of a dairy farmland, but with Hershey’s support, houses, businesses, churches, and a transportation infrastructure accreted around the plant. Because the land was surrounded by dairy farms, Hershey was able to use fresh milk to mass-produce quality milk chocolate. Hershey continued to experiment and perfect the process of
THE PROCESS OF WHAT?! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.112.56.127 (talk) 03:24, 2 October 2015 (UTC)
Milton Snavely Hershey
make that his name not milton s hershey — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.157.63.130 (talk) 13:07, 26 May 2016 (UTC)
he was a very good man
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