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Please let me know what you think! [[User:NextEraMatt|NextEraMatt]] ([[User talk:NextEraMatt|talk]]) 12:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC) |
Please let me know what you think! [[User:NextEraMatt|NextEraMatt]] ([[User talk:NextEraMatt|talk]]) 12:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC) |
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::{{replyto|Encoded}} Thanks so much! [[User:NextEraMatt|NextEraMatt]] ([[User talk:NextEraMatt|talk]]) 13:33, 19 March 2024 (UTC) |
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==NHT and ''Politics'' removal== |
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Hi editors, with the recent edits made by {{u|Encoded}}, there's some content that's been made redundant. I propose the removing the following: |
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*The ''Politics'' section in its entirety |
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*The first sentence of ''Litigation'' |
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Please let me know what you think. [[User:NextEraMatt|NextEraMatt]] ([[User talk:NextEraMatt|talk]]) 13:33, 19 March 2024 (UTC) |
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Oil plants
Is the information about oil power plants still up to date? Some sources don't mention them. --Nemo 15:43, 16 August 2017 (UTC)
Criticism section lacks neutral point of view
Greetings Wikipedians! In my humble opinion, the titles of the sub-sections are not neutral, using language that would be more at home in an advertisement or a speech: "Fighting hydropower", "Fighting rooftop solar panels", "Electoral fraud" (particularly egregious) and "Environmental harm." I'm not saying they're wrong, but they don't meet the test of avoiding advocacy. Wikipedia articles are supposed to be written from a neutral point of view , one of our fundamental principles (see Five Pillars). I'm going re-phrase these titles to make them more neutral. I'm not employed by NextEra, although I did work there long ago. Cordially, BuzzWeiser196 (talk) 17:03, 11 February 2022 (UTC)
Infobox changes request
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Hi Wikipedia, I'm Matt and I work for NextEra Energy. I'm hoping to do a pretty big overhaul of the article (I made a draft and a diff for an easy comparison) but I know I can't make those changes myself due to my COI. I'll make requests here on the Talk page.
To kick things off, I was hoping to make some updates to the article's infobox. Those changes include:
- Adding the former name of the company
- Adding the HQ address
- Updating Armando Pimentel's name to include "Jr.", as that is his name
- Updating the financial information to the numbers in the most recent 10-K
- Updating and streamlining employee figures to most recent numbers
- Changing "Divisions" to "Subsidiaries" and removing NextEra Energy Partners and NextEra Energy Services to more accurately reflect how the business units are arranged
The full infobox is in the box below.
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- ^ "SEC Form 10-K". U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. 2022. Retrieved August 23, 2023.
Please let me know what you think! Happy to answer any questions. NextEraMatt (talk) 15:33, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
Update Request - History
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Hi editors, while my infobox update request is being considered, I thought I'd also make two small requests of the article body.
I request that we change the Corporate history heading to simply History as the latter seems to me to be more concise.
I also request that we change the first sentence of History from:
- The predecessor company Florida Power & Light Company was founded in 1925.[1]
To
- NextEra Energy traces its origins to 1925 with the formation of Florida Power & Light and the formation of FPL Group in 1984.[2]
References
- ^ Cite error: The named reference
annual
was invoked but never defined (see the help page). - ^ "SEC Form 10-K". U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission. 2018. pp. 4–5. Retrieved August 23, 2023.
Because
- This is a more complete and accurate summation of the origins of the company.
Please let me know what you think! Happy to answer any questions. - NextEraMatt (talk) 16:06, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
- @Encoded: Thanks so much for your help! NextEraMatt (talk) 18:08, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
History update request 2
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Hi editors, for my next request I propose to expand the History section with some more information to flesh out the section.
First, I propose moving the sentence starting with "FPL Group changed its name" to new paragraph.
Second, I propose adding the content below after the sentence ending with "FPL Group in 1984":
References
- ^ a b Salisbury, Susan (March 21, 2010). "Juno-based FPL Group to become NextEra Energy". The Palm Beach Post. Archived from the original on March 11, 2016. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
- ^ Kolody, Tracy (April 6, 1991). "FPL Group finds buyer for insurer Colonial Penn, brings in $150 million". Sun Sentinel. Archived from the original on January 29, 2019. Retrieved August 22, 2023.
- ^ Langley, Monica; Johannes, Laura (January 7, 1998). "FPL Acquires Electric-Power Plants To Gain Presence in the Northeast". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
- ^ Hillman, Leslie (March 11, 1999). "FPL in court today". Sun Sentinel. Archived from the original on February 11, 2022. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
- ^ Norris, John (March 15, 1999). "FPL Energy Closes on Maine Power Plants". Natural Gas Intelligence. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
This helps flesh out the section more with information from the early years of FPL group using reliable sources. Please let me know what you think! If editors are interested, I made a draft and a diff showing what I hope to achieve with this article. Thanks in advance for reviewing. NextEraMatt (talk) 18:08, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- Done Encoded Talk to me! 21:54, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
- @Encoded: Thanks for doing that! NextEraMatt (talk) 17:34, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
History update request 3
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Hi editors, for my next request I'll stay in the History section with an eye for further expansion.
My next request is to add the following in a new paragraph after the sentence ending "March 1999":
References
- ^ Deogun, Nikhil; Vitzthum, Carlta; Smith, Rebecca (March 27, 2000). "Spain's Iberdrola Is in Discussions To Acquire Florida Utility Parent". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
- ^ Deogun, Nikhil; Vitzthum, Carlta (April 19, 2000). "Effort by Iberdrola to Buy FPL in U.S. Runs Afoul of Board of Spanish Firm". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
- ^ Sidel, Robin (April 3, 2001). "FPL, Entergy Blame Each Other As They Call Off $8 Billion Merger". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
- ^ Humer, Caroline (January 18, 2007). "FPL, Constellation scrap $12.5 billion merger". Reuters. Retrieved June 8, 2023.
Functionally what this does is summarize some of the sentences in the Mergers and acquisitions section and move that content to History. Please let me know what you think. NextEraMatt (talk) 17:34, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Encoded: Thanks so much! NextEraMatt (talk) 14:24, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
Merger content removal
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Hi editors, with the last change made by Encoded, there's some content in the Mergers and acquisitions section that is now redundant, as it has been summarized in the Corporate history section.
Because of that, I propose removing the first, second, third, and fifth paragraphs of the Mergers section. Please let me know what you think. NextEraMatt (talk) 14:24, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
- Done HouseBlaster (talk · he/him) 19:33, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
- @HouseBlaster: Thank you! NextEraMatt (talk) 17:24, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
History request 4
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Hi editors, for my next request, I propose adding the following sentences immediately after the sentence ending "and Constellation Energy".
Please let me know what you think! NextEraMatt (talk) 17:24, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Encoded: Thanks! NextEraMatt (talk) 12:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
History request 5
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Hi editors, continuing with my requests for the History section, I propose revising the current second-to-last sentence in the section related to the company's name change, which at present is unsourced. I propose changing it to the following and adding some additional information about where it was operating at the time, something like this:
- The following year, FPL Group rebranded as NextEra Energy. At the time, it provided power in 28 states and Canada.[1]
Immediately after that sentence, I also propose adding the following sentences, which slightly rework the sentence in the Politics section and the first sentence of the Litigation section, rendering both redundant.
- NextEra Energy subsidiary New Hampshire Transmission (NHT) reached a $6.8 million settlement with the Federal Energy Regulatory Commission (FERC) in 2016 after charging customers for the development of an electric power transmission project that was not approved.[2][3] During the 2016 Republican Party presidential primaries, NextEra Energy donated $1 million to a super PAC supporting Jeb Bush's candidacy.[4]
All together, it looks like this:
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The following year, FPL Group rebranded as NextEra Energy. At the time, it provided power in 28 states and Canada.[1] NextEra Energy subsidiary New Hampshire Transmission (NHT) reached a $6.8 million settlement with the Federal Energy Regulatory Commission (FERC) in 2016 after charging customers for the development of an electric power transmission project that was not approved.[5][6] During the 2016 Republican Party presidential primaries, NextEra Energy donated $1 million to a super PAC supporting Jeb Bush's candidacy.[4] References
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I think this rework more accurately reflects the information available in reliable sources and removes an unnecessary subhead that is only there for a single sentence.
Please let me know what you think! NextEraMatt (talk) 12:01, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Encoded: Thanks so much! NextEraMatt (talk) 13:33, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
NHT and Politics removal
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Hi editors, with the recent edits made by Encoded, there's some content that's been made redundant. I propose the removing the following:
- The Politics section in its entirety
- The first sentence of Litigation
Please let me know what you think. NextEraMatt (talk) 13:33, 19 March 2024 (UTC)