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== The audio version of this article is way out of date == |
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The audio version of this article is from January 2010! Someone needs to update this as soon as possible - so much has changed since then. [[User:MisterZed|MisterZed]] ([[User talk:MisterZed|talk]]) 11:13, 29 July 2023 (UTC) |
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:reliable source required [[User:1he0r0c1e10|1he0r0c1e10]] ([[User talk:1he0r0c1e10|talk]]) 20:10, 22 December 2023 (UTC) |
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::I'm not sure why you've responded in this manner; what does sourcing have to do with {{user|MisterZed}}'s request? In any event, it looks like information regarding audio versions of articles can be found here: [[:Category:Spoken Wikipedia requests]]. [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 20:52, 22 December 2023 (UTC) |
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== Trimming the "Expansion of the Star Trek Universe" section == |
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History sections are particularly difficult to write on wikipedia, especially with a subject that is being changed constantly. There seems to be a lot of speculation in the final section. Sourced correctly, the section seems a bit bloated. I think we can trim out these sections completely. They seem speculative... |
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"The service's Executive Vice President of Development and Programming, Julie McNamara, said they were unlikely to expand the slate of Star Trek series until one of these five shows ended, which could happen when a series' story runs its course or a lead actor's contract expires. McNamara hoped to release a new season of Star Trek each quarter. Discussing the next phase of the franchise, Kurtzman said several projects were in development. He feels there would be opportunities for future series to be associated to other Paramount Global brands such as BET and Showtime, similar to Prodigy being developed for Nickelodeon. Monthly meetings with the showrunners of each new series are held to allow coordination between the different series and ensure that "they're not stepping on each other's toes" by using the same elements of the universe, according to Kurtzman." |
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"In October 2020, Kurtzman stated that Star Trek series have been planned through 2027. Kurtzman cautioned that this was a preliminary plan, but it was necessary to plan so far out due to the long production schedules for each series." [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 17:17, 29 November 2023 (UTC) |
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: There have been no comments on this for about a month. I am going to remove the content, but I certainly would not fight adding it back if anyone has objections. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Star_Trek&oldid=1193798753 [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 18:22, 5 January 2024 (UTC) |
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:: Lets also note that Paramounts financial position, there is good reason to believe that Star Trek plans that aren't officially announced have been trimmed. [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 18:25, 5 January 2024 (UTC) |
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== Removing Unannounced Movies == |
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Do we really need to talk about movies that may or may not be produced in the future. Paramount's financial situation is very precarious. I don't think any of these plans are concrete. This page needs a bit of a trim. [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 17:02, 18 February 2024 (UTC) |
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:: This was a strange and trivial change. Film productions frequently take years of development before they are produced. Furthermore, Paramount detailed/clarified that ''none'' of their announced films are cancelled -- confirming that they are still in development. Where exactly did you move the details [[User:Oldag07]]?--[[User:DisneyMetalhead|DisneyMetalhead]] ([[User talk:DisneyMetalhead|talk]]) 06:28, 18 April 2024 (UTC) |
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[[User:DisneyMetalhead|DisneyMetalhead]], I appreciate your contributions. While you do have sources for these, the primary Star Trek page is already 176,224 bytes, nearing the [[WP:SIZERULE]]. We are currently discussing the removal of individual sections for each series on this page, with information being moved to [[List of Star Trek films]]. Studios typically have several scripts in development simultaneously for potential movies, and while they may not officially cancel them, it's not practical to include speculative scripts for every potential future Star Trek movie on a page meant to provide an overview of the franchise's history, including TV series, films, books, cultural impact, and merchandise. Pages like [[Development of Star Trek 4]] and [[List of Star Trek films]] already cover much of this. Star Trek has only produced three films in the last two decades; expecting six more in the next decade seems unrealistic. Even Star Wars hasn't been that productive. Additionally, Paramount's ongoing acquisition talks add uncertainty to the franchise's future [[https://www.nytimes.com/2024/04/03/business/dealbook/apollo-global-management-paramount.html]]. |
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Look at the state of some of the future Star Trek films that currently are on this page: |
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* The Mark L. Smith film was cancelled [[https://www.theguardian.com/film/2023/dec/22/quentin-tarantino-star-trek-mark-l-smith-week-in-geek#:~:text=Writer%20Mark%20L%20Smith%2C%20who,go%20hard%2C%E2%80%9D%20revealed%20Smith.]]. |
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* The Noah Hawley film was placed on hold by Paramount Pictures president Emma Watts [[source, current page]], who took the franchise in a different direction. |
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* The Clarkson film was cancelled [[https://collider.com/sj-clarkson-star-trek-movie/]]. |
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Is this page, already bloated as it is, really need more information about speculative films? A good compromise could be to compress all the bullet points into a single paragraph, except for the section 31 film, which has been greenlit and is in production. [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 12:02, 18 April 2024 (UTC) |
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Removed the films that have questionable interpretation of sources: |
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* Mark L Smith film has been cancelled. https://www.theguardian.com/film/2023/dec/22/quentin-tarantino-star-trek-mark-l-smith-week-in-geek |
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* Noah Hawley Film has been cancelled https://geektyrant.com/news/noah-hawley-explains-how-his-star-trek-movie-fell-apart-due-to-stupid-hollywood-executives#:~:text=Fargo%20and%20Legion%20creator%20Noah,still%20in%20this%20insane%20mindset. |
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* Vazquez - Source does not mention Vazquez. Film was suppposed to be released in 2023 |
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* Picard film: |
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: * https://variety.com/2024/tv/features/star-trek-future-starfleet-academy-section-31-michelle-yeoh-1235952301/ |
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:: "Should “Section 31” prove successful, Yeoh says she’s game for a sequel. And Kurtzman is already eyeing more opportunities for TV movies, including a possible follow-up to “Picard.”" |
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:: https://trekmovie.com/2024/01/05/patrick-stewart-reveals-new-star-trek-movie-script-featuring-jean-luc-picard-is-in-the-works/ There is nothing in this source that states that anything is firm. |
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See [[WP:RUMOR]] |
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::: As long as its detailed somewhere, whether in pros or bullets -- the average reader (who isn't a ''Star Trek'' fan) could benefit from reading the various scripts the studio has written. Furthermore, as I had stated before -- the studio clarified that none of the projects had been cancelled. This seems to override The Guardian, Geek Tyrant (side-note is this even a reliable source?), and Variety. Cheers m8s!--[[User:DisneyMetalhead|DisneyMetalhead]] ([[User talk:DisneyMetalhead|talk]]) 16:22, 27 April 2024 (UTC) |
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::::I have removed the redundant sections but did not split the TV shows into sections yet, waiting for clearer consensus on the best direction for that. - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 10:03, 25 April 2024 (UTC) |
::::I have removed the redundant sections but did not split the TV shows into sections yet, waiting for clearer consensus on the best direction for that. - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 10:03, 25 April 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::Broadcast and streaming sounds fine to me. [[User:SonOfThornhill|SonOfThornhill]] ([[User talk:SonOfThornhill|talk]]) 13:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC) |
:::::Broadcast and streaming sounds fine to me. [[User:SonOfThornhill|SonOfThornhill]] ([[User talk:SonOfThornhill|talk]]) 13:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC) |
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As long as there's are the same details and a similar layout on the List of Star Trek television series article, this doesn't seem controversial.--[[User:DisneyMetalhead|DisneyMetalhead]] ([[User talk:DisneyMetalhead|talk]]) 16:23, 27 April 2024 (UTC) |
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:: Nice, the page is 122,190 bytes as of [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Star_Trek&oldid=1221350646 this edit]. This article hasn't been this slim since 3 September 2019. That is the year of discovery's first season. This is with a bunch of new content. Keep up the good work. [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 12:19, 29 April 2024 (UTC) |
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==Proposal to move the List of Star Trek episodes into the List of Star Trek lists== |
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A proposal has been made to move the List of Star Trek episodes page into the List of Star Trek lists. [[Talk:List of Star Trek lists#Merge proposal|Discussion]] [[User:Oldag07|Oldag07]] ([[User talk:Oldag07|talk]]) 17:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC) |
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== Movies timelines == |
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Movies timeline must be separated (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Star_Trek&oldid=1232725495#Films|Films). There are two timeline and they are totally messed up. [[User:Lado85|Lado85]] ([[User talk:Lado85|talk]]) 08:53, 5 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:We already divide the films based on relevant real-world groupings and denote the alternate timeline in the heading and in prose. Why do you think we ''must'' add more headings to divide the list further? - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 09:17, 5 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::Because you have "Television films" after reboot section and it's unclear what timeline it belongs to. There is two seperate timelines and it should be separated in article and in [[Template:Star Trek]] too. [[User:Lado85|Lado85]] ([[User talk:Lado85|talk]]) 11:03, 5 July 2024 (UTC) |
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:::There are actually more timelines, and it is currently unclear what timeline the next film will be set in. - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 11:49, 5 July 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Oficially there are two timelines: |
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::::1. Tv show and related to them movies (Section 31 is direct spin-off of Discovery). |
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== Phrasing dispute == |
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I'm interested in other people's perspectives on the order of prequel and sequel, as at least one person thinks it should be this way: [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Star_Trek&diff=1252639961&oldid=1252561678]. Does anyone else agree with me? I don't want to make this some huge thing, but I do think my argument makes sense. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 08:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:I agree the wording is very confusing, but logic dictates that three sequel series and a prequel precedes the list that follows as it describes it in that order. Again, highly confusing, but unless the description and the list are both rewritten, you can see how it doesn't work. In other words, the order of production is listed, the three sequel series (TNG, DS9, VOY), followed by the prequel (ENT). [[User:Viriditas|Viriditas]] ([[User talk:Viriditas|talk]]) 09:11, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::Yes, my point was that to someone unfamiliar with the chronological order of production, listing the prequel last might give the false impression that TNG is one. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 09:21, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::Understood. I think it's just one of those things, like attorneys and physicians speaking Latin combined with legal and medical jargon. Fandom in general keeps it a bit confusing to keep the outsiders out and the insiders in. It's like that in every subculture, professional or amateur. [[User:Viriditas|Viriditas]] ([[User talk:Viriditas|talk]]) 09:36, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::Yes, but we're Wikipedia, and a lot of our readers might be unfamiliar with certain aspects of Star Trek, or any other in-universe fictional element in any other fictional series. There's a good chance someone is reading this page because someone mentioned Star Trek and they're like "what's that?". I once had that response when I casually mentioned [[Tetris]] to man in his forties, who didn't quite grasp the concept, even if he knew that video games exist. What's obvious to those in a fandom isn't always obvious to those outside it, even it's a very well known thing. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 09:44, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::If someone is unfamiliar with ''Star Trek'' and they read the updated version of the sentence (i.e. "a prequel and three sequel series: TNG, DS9, VOY, and ENT") they are going to think that TNG is a prequel and DS9, VOY, and ENT are three sequels. Your change was doing the opposite of what you were hoping for. - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 09:48, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::You think so, but I don't, even if I understand how you came to that conclusion. It's normal for people to say a "prequel and sequels", to the extent that it's a bit jarring when it's the other way around that people will think it's a deliberate choice (the way things are now, where it states sequels and prequel: TNG, DS9, VOY and ENT). It's not the biggest deal in the world, but I do think it's a perspective worth considering. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 09:51, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::It is a deliberate choice, because it is the correct order: "three sequel series and a prequel: TNG, DS9, VOY, and ENT". To say it the other way around is misleading. If you genuinely think people are going to get confused then why not split up the sentence? "three sequel series: TNG, DS9, and VOY. A prequel series was also made, ENT..." - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 09:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::I agree with adamstom97: "3 sequels and a prequel" is the clearer thing to say because that's both the order they occurred in and the order they're listed in. [[User:Ajd|AJD]] ([[User talk:Ajd|talk]]) 12:32, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::::::::I agree that the "sequel/prequel" clause should be in the order that the series themselves are listed. Another option, though I don't have suggested wording at this time, would be to do away with the "sequel/prequel" wording, perhaps in favor of something like "four spin-off series", and leave it to the descriptions of each series to convey whether they're prequels or sequels. [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 12:38, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::I like the idea of changing it to spinoff series. You're right that the descriptions of the series themselves already convey when they happen. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 13:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::::::::::I am also okay with the other proposed idea of just splitting it off into separate sentences. I realize this is a weird small thing to care about but I do think we should reduce ambiguity when we can. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 13:56, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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What are everyone's thoughts on [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Star_Trek&diff=1252681995&oldid=1252639961 this]? I really do appreciate the perspectives of everyone that's commented here. I've come around to thinking that maybe the original phrasing wasn't as confusing as I thought it was. [[User:Clovermoss|<span style="color:darkorchid">Clovermoss</span><span style="color:green">🍀</span>]] [[User talk:Clovermoss|(talk)]] 19:23, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:I have no objections to it (then again, I kind of suggested it :p ). [[User:Doniago|DonIago]] ([[User talk:Doniago|talk]]) 19:33, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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::I'm fine with the change as well. - [[User:Adamstom.97|adamstom97]] ([[User talk:Adamstom.97|talk]]) 21:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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:::No objections from me. [[User:Sjones23|Lord Sjones23]] ([[User talk:Sjones23|talk]] - [[User:Sjones23/Wikipedia contributions|contributions]]) 21:47, 22 October 2024 (UTC) |
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Redundant list of TV shows
[edit]Do we still need a section for all the series when there is a whole article that already does that at List of Star Trek television series? Feels like this is just leftover from before that article was created and was never cleaned-up. I propose we remove those sections and just have the overview table like we do for the films. - adamstom97 (talk) 12:14, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
- I'm willing to be swayed by other editors, but it does seem a bit redundant, and creates more work when updates are needed. DonIago (talk) 14:32, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
- I can get behind this. Perhaps we can compress these into three major sections:
- Broadcast series TOS, TNG, DS9, VOY, ENT
- Streaming: DIS, PIC, SNW, Academy
- Animated: TAS, Lower Decks, Prodigy
- That would seem to draw a false distinction between the animated shows and the other two categories (especially since Lower Decks at least is a streaming show as well)? DonIago (talk) 20:42, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have suggested some alternate ideas for splitting up the list of TV shows at Talk:List of Star Trek television series#Splitting up the list of series. - adamstom97 (talk) 21:19, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- I would think the most logical divide would be Animated and Live Action. Isn't that the standard division in most media articles? ——Digital Jedi Master (talk) 00:45, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- I feel that would be more arbitrary than some of the other suggestions, the three animated shows don't have much to do with one another. I think broadcast and streaming would make more sense because it keeps all the Kurtzman-era shows together. - adamstom97 (talk) 08:05, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have removed the redundant sections but did not split the TV shows into sections yet, waiting for clearer consensus on the best direction for that. - adamstom97 (talk) 10:03, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- Broadcast and streaming sounds fine to me. SonOfThornhill (talk) 13:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have moved this part of the discussion to Talk:List of Star Trek television series#Splitting up the list of series. I think it is better to keep it one place. - adamstom97 (talk) 12:20, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
- Broadcast and streaming sounds fine to me. SonOfThornhill (talk) 13:28, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- I have removed the redundant sections but did not split the TV shows into sections yet, waiting for clearer consensus on the best direction for that. - adamstom97 (talk) 10:03, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- I feel that would be more arbitrary than some of the other suggestions, the three animated shows don't have much to do with one another. I think broadcast and streaming would make more sense because it keeps all the Kurtzman-era shows together. - adamstom97 (talk) 08:05, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
As long as there's are the same details and a similar layout on the List of Star Trek television series article, this doesn't seem controversial.--DisneyMetalhead (talk) 16:23, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- Nice, the page is 122,190 bytes as of this edit. This article hasn't been this slim since 3 September 2019. That is the year of discovery's first season. This is with a bunch of new content. Keep up the good work. Oldag07 (talk) 12:19, 29 April 2024 (UTC)
Proposal to move the List of Star Trek episodes into the List of Star Trek lists
[edit]A proposal has been made to move the List of Star Trek episodes page into the List of Star Trek lists. Discussion Oldag07 (talk) 17:47, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Merged Oldag07 (talk) 18:42, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
Movies timelines
[edit]Movies timeline must be separated (https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Star_Trek&oldid=1232725495#Films%7CFilms). There are two timeline and they are totally messed up. Lado85 (talk) 08:53, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- We already divide the films based on relevant real-world groupings and denote the alternate timeline in the heading and in prose. Why do you think we must add more headings to divide the list further? - adamstom97 (talk) 09:17, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- Because you have "Television films" after reboot section and it's unclear what timeline it belongs to. There is two seperate timelines and it should be separated in article and in Template:Star Trek too. Lado85 (talk) 11:03, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- There are actually more timelines, and it is currently unclear what timeline the next film will be set in. - adamstom97 (talk) 11:49, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- Oficially there are two timelines:
- 1. Tv show and related to them movies (Section 31 is direct spin-off of Discovery).
- 2. Kelvine timeline. Lado85 (talk) 14:38, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- There are actually more timelines, and it is currently unclear what timeline the next film will be set in. - adamstom97 (talk) 11:49, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
- Because you have "Television films" after reboot section and it's unclear what timeline it belongs to. There is two seperate timelines and it should be separated in article and in Template:Star Trek too. Lado85 (talk) 11:03, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
Phrasing dispute
[edit]I'm interested in other people's perspectives on the order of prequel and sequel, as at least one person thinks it should be this way: [1]. Does anyone else agree with me? I don't want to make this some huge thing, but I do think my argument makes sense. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 08:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree the wording is very confusing, but logic dictates that three sequel series and a prequel precedes the list that follows as it describes it in that order. Again, highly confusing, but unless the description and the list are both rewritten, you can see how it doesn't work. In other words, the order of production is listed, the three sequel series (TNG, DS9, VOY), followed by the prequel (ENT). Viriditas (talk) 09:11, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, my point was that to someone unfamiliar with the chronological order of production, listing the prequel last might give the false impression that TNG is one. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 09:21, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Understood. I think it's just one of those things, like attorneys and physicians speaking Latin combined with legal and medical jargon. Fandom in general keeps it a bit confusing to keep the outsiders out and the insiders in. It's like that in every subculture, professional or amateur. Viriditas (talk) 09:36, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but we're Wikipedia, and a lot of our readers might be unfamiliar with certain aspects of Star Trek, or any other in-universe fictional element in any other fictional series. There's a good chance someone is reading this page because someone mentioned Star Trek and they're like "what's that?". I once had that response when I casually mentioned Tetris to man in his forties, who didn't quite grasp the concept, even if he knew that video games exist. What's obvious to those in a fandom isn't always obvious to those outside it, even it's a very well known thing. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 09:44, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- If someone is unfamiliar with Star Trek and they read the updated version of the sentence (i.e. "a prequel and three sequel series: TNG, DS9, VOY, and ENT") they are going to think that TNG is a prequel and DS9, VOY, and ENT are three sequels. Your change was doing the opposite of what you were hoping for. - adamstom97 (talk) 09:48, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- You think so, but I don't, even if I understand how you came to that conclusion. It's normal for people to say a "prequel and sequels", to the extent that it's a bit jarring when it's the other way around that people will think it's a deliberate choice (the way things are now, where it states sequels and prequel: TNG, DS9, VOY and ENT). It's not the biggest deal in the world, but I do think it's a perspective worth considering. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 09:51, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- It is a deliberate choice, because it is the correct order: "three sequel series and a prequel: TNG, DS9, VOY, and ENT". To say it the other way around is misleading. If you genuinely think people are going to get confused then why not split up the sentence? "three sequel series: TNG, DS9, and VOY. A prequel series was also made, ENT..." - adamstom97 (talk) 09:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with adamstom97: "3 sequels and a prequel" is the clearer thing to say because that's both the order they occurred in and the order they're listed in. AJD (talk) 12:32, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that the "sequel/prequel" clause should be in the order that the series themselves are listed. Another option, though I don't have suggested wording at this time, would be to do away with the "sequel/prequel" wording, perhaps in favor of something like "four spin-off series", and leave it to the descriptions of each series to convey whether they're prequels or sequels. DonIago (talk) 12:38, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I like the idea of changing it to spinoff series. You're right that the descriptions of the series themselves already convey when they happen. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 13:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I am also okay with the other proposed idea of just splitting it off into separate sentences. I realize this is a weird small thing to care about but I do think we should reduce ambiguity when we can. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 13:56, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree that the "sequel/prequel" clause should be in the order that the series themselves are listed. Another option, though I don't have suggested wording at this time, would be to do away with the "sequel/prequel" wording, perhaps in favor of something like "four spin-off series", and leave it to the descriptions of each series to convey whether they're prequels or sequels. DonIago (talk) 12:38, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree with adamstom97: "3 sequels and a prequel" is the clearer thing to say because that's both the order they occurred in and the order they're listed in. AJD (talk) 12:32, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- It is a deliberate choice, because it is the correct order: "three sequel series and a prequel: TNG, DS9, VOY, and ENT". To say it the other way around is misleading. If you genuinely think people are going to get confused then why not split up the sentence? "three sequel series: TNG, DS9, and VOY. A prequel series was also made, ENT..." - adamstom97 (talk) 09:55, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- You think so, but I don't, even if I understand how you came to that conclusion. It's normal for people to say a "prequel and sequels", to the extent that it's a bit jarring when it's the other way around that people will think it's a deliberate choice (the way things are now, where it states sequels and prequel: TNG, DS9, VOY and ENT). It's not the biggest deal in the world, but I do think it's a perspective worth considering. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 09:51, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- If someone is unfamiliar with Star Trek and they read the updated version of the sentence (i.e. "a prequel and three sequel series: TNG, DS9, VOY, and ENT") they are going to think that TNG is a prequel and DS9, VOY, and ENT are three sequels. Your change was doing the opposite of what you were hoping for. - adamstom97 (talk) 09:48, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, but we're Wikipedia, and a lot of our readers might be unfamiliar with certain aspects of Star Trek, or any other in-universe fictional element in any other fictional series. There's a good chance someone is reading this page because someone mentioned Star Trek and they're like "what's that?". I once had that response when I casually mentioned Tetris to man in his forties, who didn't quite grasp the concept, even if he knew that video games exist. What's obvious to those in a fandom isn't always obvious to those outside it, even it's a very well known thing. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 09:44, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Understood. I think it's just one of those things, like attorneys and physicians speaking Latin combined with legal and medical jargon. Fandom in general keeps it a bit confusing to keep the outsiders out and the insiders in. It's like that in every subculture, professional or amateur. Viriditas (talk) 09:36, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, my point was that to someone unfamiliar with the chronological order of production, listing the prequel last might give the false impression that TNG is one. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 09:21, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
What are everyone's thoughts on this? I really do appreciate the perspectives of everyone that's commented here. I've come around to thinking that maybe the original phrasing wasn't as confusing as I thought it was. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 19:23, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I have no objections to it (then again, I kind of suggested it :p ). DonIago (talk) 19:33, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I'm fine with the change as well. - adamstom97 (talk) 21:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- No objections from me. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 21:47, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
- I'm fine with the change as well. - adamstom97 (talk) 21:01, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
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