Talk:Tsunkatse

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Star Trek.com Souce

An archived source about this episode here: archive.org. Miyagawa (talk) 20:20, 20 April 2013 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 01:37, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

I shall review this. Ruby 2010/2013 01:37, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

There's no rush as I'm on holiday until the 5th November at the moment. Miyagawa (talk) 12:53, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Sounds good. Ruby 2010/2013 13:12, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back! :) Miyagawa (talk) 20:42, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Great! Hope you had a good holiday! :) I should get to posting my review later today. Ruby 2010/2013 21:35, 5 November 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• The episode had originally been called "Arena". It was described as a "clever marketing ploy" by Russ... -- This implies that the name change was the clever marketing ploy, which I'm sure it wasn't. Suggest tweaking

• I flipped around the Russ line so it doesn't link it to Arena anymore. That was unintentional. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

• Sweeps month could use a wikilink

• Added - also the the mention down in the reception section. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

• It received mixed ratings by critics --> It received mixed reviews by critics... (since you mention actual ratings in the previous sentence)

• Changed as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

• However, the fight scenes were praised by Black Belt magazine. -- Not sure that the "however" is needed here

• Removed. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

• I'd add a wikilink to Shore leave in the plot section

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 22:40, 8 November 2013 (UTC)

I got through the plot section; will add more tomorrow. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 04:16, 6 November 2013 (UTC)

Sorry about the delay with this. Have added my final comments below.

• He discloses his gratefulness... --> "The Hirogen discloses his gratefulness..." (I assume?)

• Yep. I've adjusted as noted. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

• Use consistency between percent and %

• I've swapped out the two "%"s for "percent". Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

• Is there any data out there on total viewers?

• None I'm afraid. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

• Do you have Highbeam access? I tried looking for data on total viewers and instead found these independent sources on some of the ratings you already include. I recommend you add them in to bolster your TrekNation.com citations [1] [2]

• Added both of them - I hadn't thought to check Highbeam (I've had Questia for the last year and only just got Highbeam back again). Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

• I found this from Black Belt magazine and was about to recommend you input it. But you already have! :) Very thorough research on your part.

Will place the review on hold for seven days, though I doubt it will take that long. Ruby 2010/2013 15:07, 12 November 2013 (UTC)

• Sorry about the delay, I've made the suggested changes. Miyagawa (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

• Looks good! Happy to pass this one. Ruby 2010/2013 15:14, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

question and comment

Hello, I'm new around here and have a question and comment. This is such an interesting episode! I found out that the stunt double for Jeri Ryan in this episode is Dana Hee, who has a very good Wikipedia page here. While she is not credited in the show's credits, I am on the trail of finding suitable references, perhaps to include this in her article page and possibly also this one. I'm not sure if it fits within the whole of your article here, but I think it's kind of neat and notable that the show utilized a Gold medal-winning olympic athlete to stand in for Seven of Nine. I have some internet references supporting that she was the stunt double, but I don't know if you want them. There is one in which one of the costumes from the episode has Dana Lee's name on it, , general internet sites in which it is discussed and presumed true, (various Wiki sites) and then there are references to her providing stunts for the show but not necessarily this particular episode: . So I thought I'd leave this here and see what you think.

In addition, this is not a criticism but just a general comment that is probably too picky to mention, but I was having trouble understanding what the word Tsunkatse is. It's used in the title, and also used in the first line of the plot. I have been trying to find out the meaning of this word, which after looking around, I can't find any meaning except that it appears to be a Star Trek writer's invention. Would it be good to add a clarification like (name of race) kickboxing sport called tsunkatse". If so then the usage of the word throughout the rest of the article may be clearer?

Great job on the article, I thought it was really great! Cheers.... Cityside189 (talk) 19:37, 12 August 2015 (UTC)

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