User contributions for Stephen Hui

31 October 2024

• 04:3704:37, 31 October 2024 diff hist +4 MV Mærsk Boston →History: "downturn in world economy" --> "downturn in the world economy" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

28 October 2024

• 01:1001:10, 28 October 2024 diff hist 0 Warsaw Uprising →1989 to present: Changed a midsentence improper noun to lowercase Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

25 October 2024

• 05:0805:08, 25 October 2024 diff hist −2 Emmanuelle (1974 film) →Filming: Deleted two extra periods from the end of a sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

24 October 2024

• 00:5900:59, 24 October 2024 diff hist +8 m Joseph Stilwell Copy edit; no content changes current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

22 October 2024

• 01:5801:58, 22 October 2024 diff hist −2 M27 Infantry Automatic Rifle →Design: Removed period from two captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:5701:57, 22 October 2024 diff hist −1 M27 Infantry Automatic Rifle →Fielding: Removed period from caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

21 October 2024

• 14:4814:48, 21 October 2024 diff hist 0 JS Kaga →Air defense: Removed unnecessary hyphen from "air-defense" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:2705:27, 21 October 2024 diff hist −39 m Citicorp Center engineering crisis Copy edit; no content changes
• 05:2305:23, 21 October 2024 diff hist −1 m Citicorp Center engineering crisis Removed grammatically incorrect comma

20 October 2024

• 01:4901:49, 20 October 2024 diff hist −5 Killer whales of Eden, New South Wales →Davidson whalers and "the law of the tongue": Hyphenated compound adjective "30 ft" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

19 October 2024

• 20:3220:32, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1 M320 Grenade Launcher Module →Design: Removed period from caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

14 October 2024

• 20:2620:26, 14 October 2024 diff hist −2,239 Vacuum truck Removed section on Bangalore; there's nothing unique or noteworthy about how vacuum trucks are used there that merits mention in the article current
• 20:2520:25, 14 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Vacuum truck Typo fix: "Vacuum trucks can be equipped with a high pressure pump if they are used to clean out sewers from sand" --> "sand from sewers"
• 20:2420:24, 14 October 2024 diff hist −1 m Vacuum truck Removed period from caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop"

13 October 2024

• 06:0106:01, 13 October 2024 diff hist −3 Milorganite →History: Added a space between two words and removed a wikilink to golf course per MOS:OVERLINK ("what generally should not be linked [...] everyday words understood by most readers in context" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

11 October 2024

• 21:0121:01, 11 October 2024 diff hist +4 m Trumpf Edited section titles per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" and MOS:AMP: "In normal text and headings, use and instead of the ampersand"

10 October 2024

• 04:0604:06, 10 October 2024 diff hist −11 Thomas Cook Removed imprecise/ambiguous "and the like" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:0204:02, 10 October 2024 diff hist 0 Roger Fenton the Great Exhibition --> Great Exhibition, as "the" isn't part of the name current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

7 October 2024

• 06:1606:16, 7 October 2024 diff hist −49 Ulexite Removed the dimensions of a piece of ulexite from a photo caption describing said piece of ulexite; its dimensions aren't particularly relevant or helpful in an article about ulexite in general versus that piece in particular current

5 October 2024

• 22:3722:37, 5 October 2024 diff hist +15 m Sukhoi S-70 Okhotnik-B Split up a run-on sentence
• 22:2322:23, 5 October 2024 diff hist −4 Zhou-class submarine "built at the Wuchang Shipbuilding" --> "built by Wuchang Shipbuilding" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 18:3818:38, 5 October 2024 diff hist −19 Course: Oblivion →Plot: Copy edit of an awkwardly phrased sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

3 October 2024

• 06:1306:13, 3 October 2024 diff hist +4 Grand Palais Renamed "After war
• 06:1306:13, 3 October 2024 diff hist +12 Grand Palais Renamed "Wartime" section "World Wars I and II" since the "Wartime" is too ambiguous
• 06:1106:11, 3 October 2024 diff hist +20 Grand Palais Renamed "History" section to "Construction and early years" since there are several sections describing the site's history
• 06:1006:10, 3 October 2024 diff hist −6 Grand Palais Renamed "Grand Palais today" section to "21st century" per MOS:HEAD: "section headings should [...] not redundantly refer back to the subject of the article, e.g., Early life, not Smith's early life"
• 06:1006:10, 3 October 2024 diff hist −15 Grand Palais Renamed "Wartime and the Palais" section to simply "Wartime" per MOS:HEAD: "section headings should [...] not redundantly refer back to the subject of the article, e.g., Early life, not Smith's early life"

1 October 2024

• 05:0705:07, 1 October 2024 diff hist +26 Stunt girl →History: Marked the phrase "the modern period" as needing clarification current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 05:0205:02, 1 October 2024 diff hist +34 Lizzie Halliday →Biography: Added a note that Lizzie Brown married Paul Halliday, as the previous wording said that Brown became Halliday's housekeeper immediately before referring to their marriage current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:1101:11, 1 October 2024 diff hist 0 The Citadel (mall) →Shooting incidents: Capitalized the first word on a sentence current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:1001:10, 1 October 2024 diff hist +1 The Citadel (mall) →Shooting incidents: Added a period to the end of a sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:0901:09, 1 October 2024 diff hist 0 The Citadel (mall) →Shooting incidents: Changed section heading to title case per MOS:HEAD Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

30 September 2024

• 01:2401:24, 30 September 2024 diff hist 0 Vickers Swallow Added hyphens to compound adjectives; real reason for the edit is to add a description for the last edit, which was to flag the term "wing-controlled anodyne" as needing clarification current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 01:2101:21, 30 September 2024 diff hist +158 Vickers Swallow No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

29 September 2024

• 17:4617:46, 29 September 2024 diff hist −141 Type 039A submarine Deleted External Links section, as the only link has been dead since 2009, and had essentially no content -- just a mention of the sub class

26 September 2024

• 14:4214:42, 26 September 2024 diff hist +10 Norman Cota →Post-war: Copy edit to remove unnecessary ellipses; also unclear why his physical is important enough to be mentioned, but I left it in current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

22 September 2024

• 19:5819:58, 22 September 2024 diff hist +2 Pablo Rodriguez (Canadian politician) →Early life and career: "their home was bombed [...] as his father was repeatedly jailed" --> "their home was bombed [...] and his father was repeatedly jailed" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

21 September 2024

• 15:5315:53, 21 September 2024 diff hist +28 New London Ledge Light →History: Expanded a caption to provide more context current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:5215:52, 21 September 2024 diff hist +16 New London Ledge Light Expanded a caption that just said "(2022)" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 15:4615:46, 21 September 2024 diff hist −90 Kamchatka (ship) →Sinking: Rewrote a clunky section that repeated information to be slightly less clunky Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

16 September 2024

• 05:0005:00, 16 September 2024 diff hist −2 Policlinico of Milan →History: Removed periods from captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:5804:58, 16 September 2024 diff hist 0 Policlinico of Milan →History: Improper noun "University" --> "university" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 04:1904:19, 16 September 2024 diff hist 0 Mountain whitefish →Aging fish: Changed incorrectly capitalized species name to lowercase current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

14 September 2024

• 17:2017:20, 14 September 2024 diff hist −4 m Corydoras Brevity: "not too uncommon" --> "not uncommon"
• 06:1306:13, 14 September 2024 diff hist −12 Chipa →History: Removed loaded adjective "revisionist" from "some revisionist historians" per MOS:LABEL: "Value-laden labels may express contentious opinion and are best avoided unless widely used by reliable sources to describe the subject, in which case use in-text attribution" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:1006:10, 14 September 2024 diff hist −3 Chipa →Variants: Removed periods from more captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:1006:10, 14 September 2024 diff hist −2 Chipa →History: Removed periods from captions per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

13 September 2024

• 15:2515:25, 13 September 2024 diff hist +7 m What We Do in the Shadows (TV series) Fixed broken internal link to Season 6 episode list

8 September 2024

• 19:5919:59, 8 September 2024 diff hist +12 Battle of Cape Matapan →Bletchley Park (GC&CS): Rephrased a very informally written sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 16:4616:46, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0 Battle of Cape Matapan →Battle: Improper noun "Fleet" --> "fleet" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit