User contributions for FallWithStyle
A user with 10 edits. Account created on 26 July 2020.
9 August 2024
- 19:4219:42, 9 August 2024 diff hist −1 m Chili's deleted the period from '''Chili's Grill & Bar''' (stylized as '''chili's''') is an American casual dining restaurant chain" because it created a sentence fragment.
6 August 2024
- 00:1900:19, 6 August 2024 diff hist +41 The Only Good Indians I cleaned up the writing of the flashback, and also corrected some factual errors (the article stated that the hunters were teenagers when they killed the herd of elk, but they were actually in their twenties. The story explicitly states that Lewis is in his mid thirties in the present, and this story takes place ten years prior, so they are not teenagers).
23 June 2024
- 19:5819:58, 23 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Man's best friend Changed "a common phrase used to describe" to "a common title given to", as it reads better and makes a little more sense.
18 May 2024
- 23:1023:10, 18 May 2024 diff hist −17 Man's best friend Deleted "cats" from this article. It is incorrect to include cats in the phrase "Man's Best Friend", because the phrase has always only referred to dogs.
- 23:0523:05, 18 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Tom Gunderson Crystal just turned 30, so I updated her age from 29 to 30 on this page.
29 June 2021
- 00:3700:37, 29 June 2021 diff hist −3 Hinterkaifeck murders I tidied up the opening paragraphs of the article, as they were incredibly messy and filled with typos, poor grammar and awkward sentence structure.
9 April 2021
- 17:3017:30, 9 April 2021 diff hist −1 m Military discharge I corrected the word "honourable" to "honorable". The previous spelling only appeared once on the page.
19 December 2020
- 05:5205:52, 19 December 2020 diff hist 0 Castle in the Sky I changed the phrase 'It follows the adventures of a young boy and girl in the late 20th century' to 'It follows the adventures of a young boy and girl in the late 19th century', as the original phrase was incorrect, and was off by about 100 years. Castle in the Sky takes place in the late 1800s, not the early 1900s.
23 September 2020
- 02:2602:26, 23 September 2020 diff hist +2 m List of suicides in the 21st century →Possible suicides: changed "hung" to "hanged" under Epstein.
26 July 2020
- 13:0713:07, 26 July 2020 diff hist +11 m Man's best friend I changed the phrase 'Man's best friend' is a common phrase about domestic dogs" to "'Man's best friend' is a common phrase used to describe domestic dogs", because the wording was poor and needed to be updated.