User contributions for EryZ

19 September 2024

• 16:5616:56, 19 September 2024 diff hist +88 Beta thalassemia treatment = transfusion Tag: Visual edit
• 16:4516:45, 19 September 2024 diff hist +469 Warfarin adding context to its current use Tag: Visual edit
• 16:3616:36, 19 September 2024 diff hist +77 Lecanemab info on manufacturers Tag: Visual edit
• 16:3316:33, 19 September 2024 diff hist +934 Lecanemab additional info Tag: Visual edit
• 16:2116:21, 19 September 2024 diff hist −306 Fire Emblem Engage Undid revision 1246418983 by Sergecross73 (talk) I am happy to open a talk section on this, but the opening paragraph should be limited to the premise of the game, and the trimmed text is more than adequate in conveying that. Furthermore, the core gameplay mechanics are adequately described in the second paragraph. Tags: Undo Reverted

18 September 2024

• 17:1517:15, 18 September 2024 diff hist −5 Paracetamol The word "only" is subjective and inappropriate for an encyclopedic lead section. "Only" compared to what? Sentences should state facts, not judgements. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:1317:13, 18 September 2024 diff hist −306 Fire Emblem Engage Three paragraphs is fine, however the plot in the lead is too long and detailed for that part of the article. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 06:4206:42, 18 September 2024 diff hist −130 Residency (medicine) This info is not applicable to all countries, especially countries where academic years follow calendar years. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

6 September 2024

• 06:0706:07, 6 September 2024 diff hist +3 Dominion (card game) Describe aim of game Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 06:0606:06, 6 September 2024 diff hist −129 Dominion (card game) Hopefully more concise explanation of gameplay mechanic Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 September 2024

• 07:2407:24, 5 September 2024 diff hist +111 Fire Emblem Engage →Gameplay: explaining the graphical interface more Tag: Visual edit
• 07:2207:22, 5 September 2024 diff hist −16 Fire Emblem Engage to not repeat "gameplay innovations" Tag: Visual edit
• 07:2107:21, 5 September 2024 diff hist +18 Fire Emblem Engage better sentence structure - one for positive sentiment, one for negative Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
• 07:1807:18, 5 September 2024 diff hist −282 Fire Emblem Engage changed lead to: intro, plot, gameplay/production, reception. removed all double spaces between sentences Tag: Visual edit
• 07:0807:08, 5 September 2024 diff hist +64 Mario Kart 8 adding context that this is the latest game in the series Tags: Reverted Visual edit: Switched

19 August 2024

• 03:5803:58, 19 August 2024 diff hist +2 m Dominion (card game) grammar mistake Tag: Visual edit
• 03:5703:57, 19 August 2024 diff hist +273 Dominion (card game) Describe the core unique gameplay mechanic of this genre (i.e. reshuffle cards back into draw pile) Tag: Visual edit

12 July 2024

• 18:1918:19, 12 July 2024 diff hist +11 Flaco (owl) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit

10 July 2024

• 19:3319:33, 10 July 2024 diff hist −109 Enya Remove uncited speculation Tag: Visual edit

17 May 2024

• 20:1920:19, 17 May 2024 diff hist +541 Talk:Karma (JoJo Siwa song) →Requested move 17 April 2024: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit Reply

7 May 2024

• 07:1907:19, 7 May 2024 diff hist +176 Zongzi Additional info on types of fillings Tag: Visual edit

24 April 2024

• 07:2507:25, 24 April 2024 diff hist −9 m Zongzi Better formatting of audio file for pronunciation
• 01:4801:48, 24 April 2024 diff hist +50 Zongzi Added pronunciation of Zongzi Tag: Visual edit: Switched

18 March 2024

• 19:3119:31, 18 March 2024 diff hist −663 Anemia Simplifying and organizing lead section Tag: Visual edit

17 March 2024

• 10:0610:06, 17 March 2024 diff hist 0 m Schweitzer Mountain Capitalization Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 10:0510:05, 17 March 2024 diff hist 0 m Schweitzer Mountain Capitalization Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

16 March 2024

• 11:3311:33, 16 March 2024 diff hist −9 Disco Elysium Simplify plot to encompass multiple branching paths Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

5 March 2024

• 07:5107:51, 5 March 2024 diff hist −4 Fire Emblem Engage Clearer phrasing Tags: Reverted Visual edit

4 March 2024

• 01:1701:17, 4 March 2024 diff hist +8 Serial comma Last sentence of lead better belongs earlier when describing its general use Tag: Visual edit
• 01:0801:08, 4 March 2024 diff hist +263 Fire Emblem Reformatted lead to make each paragraph a discrete topic Tag: Visual edit

3 March 2024

• 22:4522:45, 3 March 2024 diff hist 0 Pfizer Capitalization Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1321:13, 3 March 2024 diff hist −2 m Ibuprofen Extra spacing removed Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1221:12, 3 March 2024 diff hist −61 Paracetamol Condensing two naming sections Tag: Visual edit
• 21:1021:10, 3 March 2024 diff hist −19 Paracetamol The citations clearly state efficacy and the language here should reflect that. ("Effective nonspecific medications [for migraine] include acetaminophen" and "Paracetamol 1000 mg provided a small benefit [...] for people with frequent episodic TTH".) Tag: Visual edit
• 21:0521:05, 3 March 2024 diff hist −55 Multi-stage fitness test →top: Too many alternative names in lead Tag: Visual edit
• 21:0421:04, 3 March 2024 diff hist +512 Frontotemporal dementia →Management: Antipsychotics for agitation Tag: Visual edit

28 February 2024

• 07:5607:56, 28 February 2024 diff hist +298 Harvard–Radcliffe Collegium Musicum →Recent concert seasons: citation Tag: Visual edit
• 07:5407:54, 28 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Harvard–Radcliffe Collegium Musicum →Recent Concert Seasons: Capitalization Tag: Visual edit

25 February 2024

• 11:0811:08, 25 February 2024 diff hist +92 N Draft:Arginine vasopressin resistance EryZ moved page Draft:Arginine vasopressin resistance to Arginine vasopressin resistance: Move to mainspace Tag: New redirect
• 11:0811:08, 25 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Arginine vasopressin resistance EryZ moved page Draft:Arginine vasopressin resistance to Arginine vasopressin resistance: Move to mainspace current
• 11:0811:08, 25 February 2024 diff hist +92 N Draft:Arginine vasopressin deficiency EryZ moved page Draft:Arginine vasopressin deficiency to Arginine vasopressin deficiency Tag: New redirect
• 11:0811:08, 25 February 2024 diff hist 0 m Arginine vasopressin deficiency EryZ moved page Draft:Arginine vasopressin deficiency to Arginine vasopressin deficiency current
• 11:0111:01, 25 February 2024 diff hist +40 N Arginine vasopressin deficiency -- Draft creation using the WP:Article wizard -- Redirect to central diabetes insipidus Tag: New redirect
• 11:0011:00, 25 February 2024 diff hist +99 Nephrogenic diabetes insipidus →top: Adding new name to lead Tag: Visual edit
• 10:5810:58, 25 February 2024 diff hist −183 Central diabetes insipidus →top: Formatting new name correctly within the article Tag: Visual edit
• 10:5510:55, 25 February 2024 diff hist +44 N Arginine vasopressin resistance -- Draft creation using the WP:Article wizard -- Redirect to Nephrogenic diabetes insipidus Tag: New redirect
• 02:5402:54, 25 February 2024 diff hist −33 Flaco (owl) Prior sentence was grammatically incorrect, suffering from modifying phrase–noun disagreement. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
• 02:4302:43, 25 February 2024 diff hist +27 Flaco (owl) Existing sentence has suboptimal phrasing, reworded to clarify that Flaco took up residence around Central Park, not the person who cut open the enclosure Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit

23 February 2024

• 08:4008:40, 23 February 2024 diff hist 0 Women in the United Arab Emirates Capitalization Tag: Visual edit

22 February 2024

• 01:1701:17, 22 February 2024 diff hist +32 Jiaozi gyoza better referred to as the Japanese variant, not the same thing Tag: Visual edit