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1 April 2024

• 17:1117:11, 1 April 2024 diff hist +15 Daylight saving time →Effects on social relations: Fixed typo from "They concluded that civil society are non-trivial" to "They concluded that the effects on civil society are non-trivial" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 June 2012

• 19:4119:41, 20 June 2012 diff hist +1 The Hucksters →Critical reception: typo

16 June 2012

• 17:3317:33, 16 June 2012 diff hist +16 The Last Picture Show Undid revision 494765827 by 68.55.186.99 (talk) "raped" gives the wrong impression; she was willing and of age

11 May 2012

• 04:0704:07, 11 May 2012 diff hist 0 Joan Harrison (screenwriter) →Biography: Fixed syntax

4 May 2012

• 21:5921:59, 4 May 2012 diff hist +2 The Conspirators (1944 film) →Plot: fix spelling error
• 16:4716:47, 4 May 2012 diff hist −1 Bonnie and Clyde →1932: Early jobs, early murders: "Wile" is correct, per dictionary.com
• 16:4416:44, 4 May 2012 diff hist +34 Bonnie and Clyde →1933: Platte City and Dexfield Park: Armory was burglary not robbery; Sowers getaway was immediate, not later; also, fix self-evident caption

3 May 2012

• 18:5718:57, 3 May 2012 diff hist −12 Strangers on a Train (film) Undid revision 489810666 by Philip Cross (talk) awkward and unneeded

2 May 2012

• 15:4015:40, 2 May 2012 diff hist +8 Shibe Park →Boxing, politics, soccer, religion: spiff sentence

27 April 2012

• 16:5116:51, 27 April 2012 diff hist +16 Shibe Park →1938–1954: New tenant, new name, new owner: tweaks

20 April 2012

• 17:4117:41, 20 April 2012 diff hist −1 Bonnie and Clyde Undid revision 488273237 by 71.23.22.254 (talk) "wile" is correct, per dictionary.com

19 April 2012

• 17:5317:53, 19 April 2012 diff hist +1 The Strawberry Blonde →Development and production: Thanx for sharp-eyed clarification, Monkey! I've made that mistake for 50 years! Added # between word and bracket

17 April 2012

• 13:3313:33, 17 April 2012 diff hist −5 The Strawberry Blonde Undid revision 486757415 by Blacksqr (talk) There is nothing wrong with "he was loathe to" construction, so [sic] is unneeded

3 April 2012

• 13:4913:49, 3 April 2012 diff hist +110 Shibe Park →1938–1954: New tenant, new name, new owner: added a link to last-game photo

30 March 2012

• 17:2317:23, 30 March 2012 diff hist −1 Bonnie and Clyde Undid revision 484495314 by Annihilannic (talk)"wile away" is correct per dictionary.com

18 February 2012

• 20:3120:31, 18 February 2012 diff hist +229 Shibe Park →1907: Design and construction: Restored information to footnote, deleted incorrect "the", restored correct verb tense
• 13:1213:12, 18 February 2012 diff hist −13 Shibe Park Post GA-nom rejection, reunited two pieces on Shibe/Mack management and expansion

16 February 2012

• 18:0418:04, 16 February 2012 diff hist +971 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: Images are all important
• 17:4917:49, 16 February 2012 diff hist +609 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: Spite fence anomaly interrupts flow of main history
• 17:2017:20, 16 February 2012 diff hist −4 Shibe Park →Boxing, politics, soccer, religion: "briefly" more accurate than "temporarily"
• 17:0417:04, 16 February 2012 diff hist −4 Shibe Park →History: Removed unneeded period from caption to fix one-word widow it caused
• 17:0017:00, 16 February 2012 diff hist +24 Shibe Park →History: tweaked caption regarding rooftop bleachers: added historical context
• 16:4516:45, 16 February 2012 diff hist −15 Shibe Park →Politicians, pugilists, proselytizers, and soccer: Softened alliteration, yet more descriptive than totally non-informative "other events"
• 16:4016:40, 16 February 2012 diff hist −23 Shibe Park →Professional football: Caption stacks better with FDR; spelled-out name is prominent enough in ticket image
• 16:2816:28, 16 February 2012 diff hist −214 Shibe Park →Memorable games: deleted duplicate sentence Tag: references removed
• 01:5701:57, 16 February 2012 diff hist +185 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: reinstated seven free PD images per discussion
• 01:5301:53, 16 February 2012 diff hist +713 Shibe Park reinstate free PD images per discussion
• 01:3101:31, 16 February 2012 diff hist +451 Shibe Park reinstated free PD images
• 01:1101:11, 16 February 2012 diff hist +280 Shibe Park →History: reinstate two free images per talk page

15 February 2012

• 13:5813:58, 15 February 2012 diff hist +128 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: edit
• 13:5513:55, 15 February 2012 diff hist +478 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: 7 free-use photos removed without explanation
• 03:4203:42, 15 February 2012 diff hist +441 Talk:Shibe Park →Discussion at GA: removal of many photos: new section

14 February 2012

• 14:3914:39, 14 February 2012 diff hist +1,413 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: photo removal

10 February 2012

• 06:5106:51, 10 February 2012 diff hist +770 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: article has been diminished
• 05:4905:49, 10 February 2012 diff hist +752 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Outstanding issues: trending away from being good

25 January 2012

• 16:0916:09, 25 January 2012 diff hist +275 Talk:Shibe Park/GA1 →Comments

19 January 2012

• 15:2215:22, 19 January 2012 diff hist −18 Shibe Park Correct clumsy passive voice in caption

16 January 2012

• 00:0700:07, 16 January 2012 diff hist −12 Shibe Park →Last years: The church is called Evangelistic, not Evangelical
• 00:0100:01, 16 January 2012 diff hist −48 Shibe Park MLB did not exist in Shibe Park's era, therefore its teams could not have been MLB teams. They were franchises of the AL and the NL.

11 January 2012

• 20:4220:42, 11 January 2012 diff hist −1 Shibe Park →1955–1970: Carpenter, Phillies and decline: The dairy's name was Formost, no "e"