Talk:Roman salute
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Reference/content modifications
The claims made by Tamir Bar-On in his book "Where are all the fascists gone?" with regards to football teams from Rome are devoid of any substantial evidence, in fact, they are probably entirely fictitious. No study has ever been conducted to prove that one team has a larger Jewish fan base than the other, and Mussolini tried to have Lazio dissolved and merged into AS Roma, so he definitely was not a Lazio fan. This has lead me to remove Bar-On's source as its references are fictitious. This resulted in some changes in the "Post World War II" section, specifically the third paragraph in the 'Italy' subsection.
Mention of the hand gesture in old sources
Saying some kind of right hand gesture is not mentioned in any source is a bit of a stretch. I think that segment should be rewritten. I know of at least one mention of right hand gesture in "Judean War" written by Josephus. Here's what he says when describing rituals of Roman soldiers upon going to campaign and breaking camp:...Then does the crier stand at the general’s right hand, and asks them thrice, in their own tongue, whether they be now ready to go out to war or not. To which they reply as often, with a loud and cheerful voice, saying, “We are ready.” And this they do almost before the question is asked them: they do this as filled with a kind of martial fury, and at the same time that they so cry out, they lift up their right hands also. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 178.149.0.110 (talk) 11:27, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
Another Description in Josephus
Josephus states in The Wars of the Jews, Book VII Chapter V "when they saw him coming up to them they stood on both sides of the way, and stretched out their right hands, saluting him..." (Whiston translation.) Although Flavius Josephus was Jewish, his history was written after he defected to the Romans, so this could be considered Roman literature.
Although Josephus doesn't give a precise description of the salute, it is nitpicking to say that "this description is unknown in Roman literature and is never mentioned by ancient historians of Rome." The Roman people stretched out their right hands in a salute. Was the arm angle 135° with the palm down and the fingers together? Josephus doesn't say. But even if he doesn't give all of the details, the gesture was clearly identical or very similar to that under discussion. This reference should be included in the article.Bikejeff (talk) 21:19, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
the gesture was clearly identical or very similar to that under discussion
: I personally would disagree that that's clearly identical; there are a lot of ways to stretch out a right hand. But it doesn't matter what you or I think; neither of us, nor any other Wikipedia editor, gets to make that call. Doing so is original research, which is prohibited on Wikipedia. Simply citing Josephus isn't enough; you need a secondary, reliable, scholarly source that talks about that passage in Josephus being evidence for the modern "Roman salute" in antiquity. Josephus is a primary source; we need a secondary source. As the NOR policy says:Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation.
You are interpreting that the passage in Josephus is relevant to the subject of the modern Roman salute; thus, you need a reliable secondary source to back that up. Writ Keeper ⚇♔ 21:27, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
After studying Wikipedia's policy on original research I believe that it would be acceptable to add the Josephus quote without comment. It is a description of a Roman salute so it should be included in the article entitled "Roman salute." I have been unable to find a secondary source but Wikipedia does allow primary sources to be quoted as long as I don't include analysis, evaluation, interpretation, or synthesis. Does that sound reasonable? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bikejeff (talk • contribs) 01:41, 13 December 2020 (UTC)