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I've rephrased some of the summary to make the meaning a little clearer. It read as though Hector's plan was to rescue Reggie then commit suicide. [[User:77.99.100.107|77.99.100.107]] 11:48, 18 August 2007 (UTC)
: I'm grateful for the earlier efforts on the synopsis, but having just watched the film, I'd like to note the synopsis is still woefully inadequate, with some events out of sequence, some things misleading, and other things misunderstood. Additionally it seems oblivious to the dramatic reversal of expectations around Audrey's presentation, which could be difficult to put into a synopsis but still worthwhile. Other notes: Regina doesn't realize what the zombie is eating - technically it's true that she sees him eating Larry,
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