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1 - "The Sega CD is an add-on device for the Sega Genesis video game console, designed and produced by Sega and released in North America in 1992"
So this first sentence of the lead announces it was launched in North America as an Add on for the "Genesis", when it should state it was launched
in Japan first as the "Mega-CD" as an addon for the Mega-Drive, displaying the information chronologially out of order to support your regional bias
is wrong. In fact if you got rid of this paragraph all together it would read much better and more neutral as the second paragraph would make a much
better lead starting with "In early 1991, Sega announced the Mega-CD for release in Japan in late 1991, North America (as the Sega CD) in 1992, and
in Europe in 1993"<br />
2 - References to the "Genesis" through out instead of "Genesis and Mega-Drive" or "Mega-Drive and Genesis" again show a strong North American regional bias<br />
3 - "The Sega CD can only be used in conjunction with a Genesis system," this sentence is just wrong all together.<br />
4 - The article lists the USA price but fails to list the UK launch price of 269.99 pounds or any price for any country in Europe again showing a regional bias<br />
5 - All the sources come from American sites and writers who ONLY have an American perspective on the system.
6 - RE TITLECHANGES the original topic title was and always has been "Sega Mega-CD" and was only changed last month with a one day vote which no one was made aware of apart from a few American editors from the [[Mega Drive]] naming dispute.[[Special:Contributions/94.172.126.154|94.172.126.154]] ([[User talk:94.172.126.154|talk]]) 03:35, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
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