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She began translating biographies of Palestinian jihadist Abdullah Yusuf Azzam who was one of the most prominent Arab foreign fighter during the Soviet-Afghan war later being known as the "father of global jihad".(ref: http://www.brookings.edu/research/opinions/2011/09/11-riedel and https://web.archive.org/web/20160521092655/https://books.google.com/books?id=Uw1WGl0iHa0C&pg=PA33)and became more strict in her religion, wearing a niqāb—a black veil that covered everything but her eyes[55]—and avoiding any music—even background music at science exhibits.[54] (Use original sources) [[User:AwesomeCantaloupe|AwesomeCantaloupe]] ([[User talk:AwesomeCantaloupe|talk]]) 03:24, 16 February 2024 (UTC)
== Neutral language ==
I see a lot of language that ought to be edited for more neutrality of tone. Particularly the last line of the "Children" section: "Their father and his parents have not been allowed to see either child." The last sentence of the "Sentencing" section also needs attention: "In a notably gracious exchange between the bestower and recipient of an 80+ year sentence of incarceration, the judge wished her "the very best going forward", and both Siddiqui and the judge thanked each other." [[User:Sundaycarvery|Sundaycarvery]] ([[User talk:Sundaycarvery|talk]]) 01:38, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
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